Wednesday, November 08, 2006

Poetry Thursday (Snapshot)


Night risings--listen--
the freefall of an apple
a flurry of wings










Artist: Gerus Igor

17 comments:

silverlight said...

Eloquent minimalism.

Dana said...

:)

No matter how few words you use, you create something fantastic.

~Dana.
http://sublimation.wordpress.com/

madd said...

Beautiful and simple words..

Anonymous said...

I like the ambiguity of the apple having wings- cool- and I usually don't care for Haiku!

Pauline said...

There's a whole world within your words. Beautifully done.

Pam said...

Lovely words, beautiful feeling!

slickdpdx said...

Great piece.

Anonymous said...

The stillness of this poem is not scary. It is peaceful and simple and right.

desert rat said...

Nicely done. I really like the picture, too.

twitches said...

Awesome - both poem and picture.

Maryellen said...

Powerful words and though few, give a crystal clear sensation of a single speck of time in life.

Anonymous said...

I nearly leaned forward when you said listen, and I did hear an apple and "a flurry of wings". Well done.

pepektheassassin said...

Thanx everyone, for all your kind words! Now I should get back to my NaNo...I'm sooooo bad!

k said...

What they all said.

paris parfait said...

Beautiful!

Pris said...

This is VERY nicely done!

Kirsten N. Namskau said...

You have a very special blogg. All of them are different than usually bloggs.
Very nice.