Tuesday, March 09, 2010
RWP Volta
Volta
Sixty miles per hour
along the Pacific Coast Highway
beside you, and you say, I wish
that you would lay your hand upon my thigh,
and so I do. The sea is gray with rain,
and no perceptible horizon reveals
saltwater to sky.
Now that I am old, ad patres, as it were,
and you are older still, I regret to say
that yours was not the first
my hand had touched.
(ad patres, Latin, to be dead, to be gathered to ones forefathers.) :)
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7 comments:
Yeah! Like it! Another book coming together? :)
interesting and thought provoking....I like it.
Very evocative piece. Thanks for sharing.
Pamela
very enjoyable!
I really like the way the first stanza flows from speed and place to exploration of the other to a wide, impersonal vista. Beautiful and real!
Age as a volta. Nice! After time to regret the early order of events is softly telling.
I enjoyed reading this poem, Joyce!
Perfect! It resonates with me and stirs a pot of memory from that same road.
I can see myself in this piece too! Getting older it seems nostalgic!
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