Monday, December 03, 2007
WI: The Promise
This began as a poem I wrote for my husband on Valentine's Day quite a few years ago. My brother, who is a composer, needed lyrics for a Mother's Day piece he was writing. So I did a little revising of the original, and this is the result. I wish you could hear the music that accompanies the words--like a lullaby, like being rocked in a boat (or a cradle, or a rocking chair), in a beautiful haunting minor key:
Because I did not know
'til now the depths of me,
and heights I never saw, until
the traces of my childhood lost
bore witness how my mother gave to me
the world in infant hands...
a star, a ship, a tree.
Now I lift my hand
and call upon her name.
"Mother, it is I. Your gift
so dearly held, was not given in vain!"
Because I know this now,
I give you back the world you gave to me:
the sky, and seas, unbound and limitless,
and never small again.
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Photo: My mother and my brother, circa 1933
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18 comments:
Very nicely written
"Mother, it is I. Your gift
so dearly held, was not given in vain!"
liked these words a lot
Beautiful. Both photo and words. I was thinking of my mother while reading this...
Totally breath taking. This is so beautiful Thank you very much
Lovely.....always so worth a visit here!
You have done it again!Excellent.
It is beautiful, sad and hopeful. How'd you do that!
Very nicely done a wonderful piece thanks for sharing this.
Thanks, folks. It's a lot better with the music!
lovely.. both the picture and the words.. the words were so profound they leaped out at me. thanks,
straight to the heart.
Beautiful words - promising, poignant and powerful...
"Mother it is I."
Such a wonderful thing you have created!
The poetry sure reminded me of my mom, and oh yes, she gave me the world, if only I can give her back half what she gave me, if only I can be half what she was to me! Thank you.
Your writing always has such depth and passion. You have a wonderful gift.
I don't know if it's better with music or not, but your holiday music made me smile.
I hardly recognize the place!
Beautiful poem/lyrics.
Your Christmas music makes me jump and spill coffee..or chai..
I'm easily startled..festive though!
Beautiful, touching... wonderful!
Just beautiful...
Hey girlfriend! I've missed alot over here and this poem stole my heart. Wonderful!
Enjoyed your creative posts and I'm glad to be back. ;)
XXOO
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