Monday, November 26, 2007
WI: A Letter
I know a woman lovely in her bones
--Theodore Roethke
Dear Omniscient Whomever,
I know a man unlovely in his bones,
by any human measures, of ill health,
and filled with parasites, with body parts
as rotted as the pistons of an old
Plymouth, still, sweet in his pure and tender
soul, who would be raised from his sickbed by
angels, sharp-edged but in no great hurry,
spinning on their graceful harpy wings like
falling-down galaxies. He raises his
obscene middle finger toward the coat-rack
in the corner, in the half-light, spinning.
I know how it is, how space flight is a
risky business. I wonder why in a
universe where angels dance with ions
in a hundred visions and revisions,
Prufrock-like, why is this final, deadly
apparition not an angel? Would not
an angel, any angel, even an
unlovely one be better than this per-
verse revolving coat-rack in the corner?
With Love,
Pepek
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14 comments:
He raises his obscene middle finger towards the coat rack. What a clever letter about a coat rack. Very original.
Amazing how you have brought life to such a mundane object. The imaginative world you have created here has me reading this more than a few times.
P.S. Just saw that you stopped by my main blog. Thank you for your continued thoughts for George. Annie
Oh, this is very, very special. This is spun from gold dust. Excellent work.
This is wonderful. I love all the places it takes me.. especially "their graceful harpy wings like falling-down galaxies..." a letter to be read, and re-read, again and again...
Very powrful, I must say
so many wonderful lines in this one - my favorites: "I wonder why in a
universe where angels dance with ions
in a hundred visions and revisions,
Prufrock-like, why is this final, deadly
apparition not an angel?"
Aren't words wonderful playthings?
sly humor-
I think I got cut off. :-)
What bit of serious fun.
This is terrific - such an unexpected take on the prompt! Your imagination is working overtime and it's beautiful!
Your imagination dazzles me! You work magic with your words and this is exceptional.
Actually, my best friend's husband is very sick, and she told me he was seeing the coat-rack revolving. She said, if he's going to hallucinate, why can't he see ANGELS?
Oh, says I, I don't know how to answer that, but there is a poem there....
I am glad you all think it is a poem, too.
BTW, this is syllabic -- 10 syllables to a line. Syllabics are fun to work with.
How on earth you came it with this I can't imagine. Brilliant - just brilliant
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