tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post6010049448650404182..comments2023-06-23T07:40:29.749-06:00Comments on following the little god...: RWP: PantoumJoyce Ellen Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-7077579682985588302008-03-19T23:12:00.000-06:002008-03-19T23:12:00.000-06:00those are very cool! I thought this was some alas...those are very cool! I thought this was some alaska photos...nope! very cool<BR/><BR/>ascenderrisesabove.com/wordpressAscenderRisesAbovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04635424605245677136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-88777371136014037942008-03-13T10:25:00.000-06:002008-03-13T10:25:00.000-06:00Wow is all I can say. My old free verse self could...Wow is all I can say. My old free verse self could never do that. I think you did a great job and wrote a very good Poem.<BR/><BR/><BR/>-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-27284073192309305662008-03-07T20:04:00.000-07:002008-03-07T20:04:00.000-07:00I like that!I like that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-42183788129766170232008-03-06T14:29:00.000-07:002008-03-06T14:29:00.000-07:00You did a superb job....I can't write to rules at ...You did a superb job....I can't write to rules at all (except tiny haikus) so my hat is off to you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-23652303198507732522008-03-05T17:12:00.000-07:002008-03-05T17:12:00.000-07:00I love form poetry and you rocked this. Brrrr!I'm...I love form poetry and you rocked this. Brrrr!<BR/><BR/>I'm back but taking it slow. :)<BR/><BR/>XXOOTammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-47910239268916134212008-03-05T09:30:00.000-07:002008-03-05T09:30:00.000-07:00Cool shots!Cool shots!slickdpdxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16405664821927732795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-21034250728916653862008-03-04T18:41:00.000-07:002008-03-04T18:41:00.000-07:00I wasn't complaining. I LIKE being asked to play!...I wasn't complaining. I LIKE being asked to play! :DJoyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-27869158779423246192008-03-04T14:52:00.000-07:002008-03-04T14:52:00.000-07:00I'm leaving this here in case you don't get back t...I'm leaving this here in case you don't get back to my blog - and thanks for looking around there! <BR/><BR/>Nonce is simply a term for a poem that follows a unique pattern (for that poem). A rhyme-scheme for example, a recurring word or phrase, pattern of alliteration, etc. <BR/><BR/>It isn't a form in itself. <BR/><BR/>As for facebook. I don't get it, really. All the poking (my mama taught me that was rude), hugging and karma. . . but it is a way to keep in touch with people you could easily lose track of. In my case poets I have met but have no occasion to email. Handy networking. AND I promote Babel Fruit and get announcements from other journals. You don't HAVE to play.ren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-16911556030932950822008-03-04T04:26:00.000-07:002008-03-04T04:26:00.000-07:00it may be hard but you did it well. im non-conform...it may be hard but you did it well. im non-conformist too when it comes to poetry hehe <BR/><BR/>the rhymes are refreshing to read toototomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-16161423052225072792008-03-04T04:12:00.000-07:002008-03-04T04:12:00.000-07:00Now that was clever. Worth the effort.Now that was clever. Worth the effort.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-11937366112659128642008-03-04T02:54:00.000-07:002008-03-04T02:54:00.000-07:00Hard work does pay off!Hard work does pay off!ren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1428124304939660532008-03-03T19:09:00.000-07:002008-03-03T19:09:00.000-07:00I love everything about this poem! I didn't even b...I love everything about this poem! I didn't even bother with rhyme...<BR/><BR/>I really liked the line breaks - it helps avoid monotony, a droning sound that a pantoum could create.<BR/><BR/>I like the metaphor of road here too. <BR/><BR/>When I saw the first photo, I thought it was a forest. Funny how the brain interprets visual input.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-27482952602891822062008-03-03T18:11:00.000-07:002008-03-03T18:11:00.000-07:00well i think you did a fine job... you kept the rh...well i think you did a fine job... you kept the rhyme nicely coordinated and the round about of the story rings thru... i value the time and effort i know you put into trying it... excellentpaisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-33813500484892249402008-03-03T17:28:00.000-07:002008-03-03T17:28:00.000-07:00Even though it was cold, the sun melted it away pr...Even though it was cold, the sun melted it away pretty fast. I'm glad I took the pictures when I did.<BR/><BR/>Are you thinking about OMNI? That was a GREAT magazine!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-45210791847139332172008-03-03T17:17:00.000-07:002008-03-03T17:17:00.000-07:00Even though it was cold, the sun melted it away pr...Even though it was cold, the sun melted it away pretty fast. I'm glad I took the pictures when I did.<BR/><BR/>Are you thinking about OMNI? That was a GREAT magazine!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-14220430622683269772008-03-03T16:59:00.000-07:002008-03-03T16:59:00.000-07:00Cool frost pattern. It reminds me of that artist ...Cool frost pattern. It reminds me of that artist (don't remember his name) that would do alien kind of looking paintings. They were often in some science mag you and dad subscribed to back in the day. If think he also did a painting for the Dead Kennedy's album Frankenchrist.<BR/><BR/>Did you let the sun melt it away or did you scrape it off?Paul Bunyanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06903768388418848444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-53482010929690475432008-03-03T15:05:00.000-07:002008-03-03T15:05:00.000-07:00Absolutely worth the hard work! And it even rhyme...Absolutely worth the hard work! And it even rhymes! That makes it doubly difficult!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-37314503694963287992008-03-03T15:03:00.000-07:002008-03-03T15:03:00.000-07:00Very Nice ;-)Very Nice ;-)Yasmeen Christianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02864206184670134155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-31044724966568620622008-03-03T14:33:00.000-07:002008-03-03T14:33:00.000-07:00Yeah, it was surely hard. But look what it turned ...Yeah, it was surely hard. But look what it turned into!Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-75167674009827677892008-03-03T13:44:00.000-07:002008-03-03T13:44:00.000-07:00it might have been hard pepek, but my goodness the...it might have been hard pepek, but my goodness the outcome was EXCELLENT! i always find that when we push ourselves to go over and beyond is when we tap into our best...<BR/><BR/>loved the repetions and the passion behind it....absolutely loved it....rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.com