tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post218926035228949329..comments2023-06-23T07:40:29.749-06:00Comments on following the little god...: WI: A LetterJoyce Ellen Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-33708563299015273642007-11-27T16:35:00.000-07:002007-11-27T16:35:00.000-07:00How on earth you came it with this I can't imagine...How on earth you came it with this I can't imagine. Brilliant - just brilliantKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-16371149753534367882007-11-27T12:07:00.000-07:002007-11-27T12:07:00.000-07:00BTW, this is syllabic -- 10 syllables to a line. ...BTW, this is syllabic -- 10 syllables to a line. Syllabics are fun to work with.Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-81360839159117535432007-11-27T12:03:00.000-07:002007-11-27T12:03:00.000-07:00Actually, my best friend's husband is very sick, a...Actually, my best friend's husband is very sick, and she told me he was seeing the coat-rack revolving. She said, if he's going to hallucinate, why can't he see ANGELS?<BR/><BR/>Oh, says I, I don't know how to answer that, but there is a poem there....<BR/><BR/>I am glad you all think it is a poem, too.Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-15770292972889318472007-11-27T09:49:00.000-07:002007-11-27T09:49:00.000-07:00Your imagination dazzles me! You work magic with ...Your imagination dazzles me! You work magic with your words and this is exceptional.Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14040757371778588395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-76183504265769155412007-11-27T09:10:00.000-07:002007-11-27T09:10:00.000-07:00This is terrific - such an unexpected take on the ...This is terrific - such an unexpected take on the prompt! Your imagination is working overtime and it's beautiful!paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-29630779814452477832007-11-27T03:55:00.000-07:002007-11-27T03:55:00.000-07:00I think I got cut off. :-) What bit of serious fun...I think I got cut off. :-) <BR/>What bit of serious fun.ren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-87723505056882900682007-11-27T03:54:00.000-07:002007-11-27T03:54:00.000-07:00sly humor-sly humor-ren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-38325836801365014042007-11-27T02:51:00.000-07:002007-11-27T02:51:00.000-07:00so many wonderful lines in this one - my favorites...so many wonderful lines in this one - my favorites: "I wonder why in a<BR/>universe where angels dance with ions<BR/>in a hundred visions and revisions,<BR/>Prufrock-like, why is this final, deadly<BR/>apparition not an angel?"<BR/><BR/>Aren't words wonderful playthings?Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-88387766168347040282007-11-27T01:24:00.000-07:002007-11-27T01:24:00.000-07:00Very powrful, I must sayVery powrful, I must sayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-22963253643594718372007-11-27T00:29:00.000-07:002007-11-27T00:29:00.000-07:00This is wonderful. I love all the places it takes ...This is wonderful. I love all the places it takes me.. especially "their graceful harpy wings like falling-down galaxies..." a letter to be read, and re-read, again and again...Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07101643429585271655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-60079240586661815302007-11-26T23:36:00.000-07:002007-11-26T23:36:00.000-07:00Oh, this is very, very special. This is spun from ...Oh, this is very, very special. This is spun from gold dust. Excellent work.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-10346689917422442372007-11-26T23:09:00.000-07:002007-11-26T23:09:00.000-07:00P.S. Just saw that you stopped by my main blog. ...P.S. Just saw that you stopped by my main blog. Thank you for your continued thoughts for George. AnnieAnnie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-49087888934738501892007-11-26T22:44:00.000-07:002007-11-26T22:44:00.000-07:00Amazing how you have brought life to such a mundan...Amazing how you have brought life to such a mundane object. The imaginative world you have created here has me reading this more than a few times.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-26983566621412127212007-11-26T22:43:00.000-07:002007-11-26T22:43:00.000-07:00He raises his obscene middle finger towards the co...He raises his obscene middle finger towards the coat rack. What a clever letter about a coat rack. Very original.Marjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.com