tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post116916211065956928..comments2023-06-23T07:40:29.749-06:00Comments on following the little god...: PT: They Never Told Me Not To Go ThereJoyce Ellen Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1170345325256473682007-02-01T08:55:00.000-07:002007-02-01T08:55:00.000-07:00the imagery in this one is perfect for the feeling...the imagery in this one is perfect for the feeling evoked: pinched and brown as a scroll of inkstained goatskins ... Kyrie eleison -- filaments of innocence -- ... there is a certain holiness in repetition. The way you begin and end this evocation with "I am not innocent." You are the writer. You are not innocent. But even more important, you <I>are</I> innocent. oh what do i know? just that your words today strike home/heart.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169498993289067622007-01-22T13:49:00.000-07:002007-01-22T13:49:00.000-07:00Dark and sinister and, yes, beautiful...as others ...Dark and sinister and, yes, beautiful...as others have said--certainly conveys a strong "place"...enjoyed this one.<BR/>Love,<BR/>D.Left-handed Trees...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06057727021295729384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169237762684280502007-01-19T13:16:00.000-07:002007-01-19T13:16:00.000-07:00Well done! I loved the prompt I'm just bummed I wa...Well done! I loved the prompt I'm just bummed I was so busy.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169236827702905392007-01-19T13:00:00.000-07:002007-01-19T13:00:00.000-07:00Wonderful. You always get the mind moving.Wonderful. You always get the mind moving.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169214847660293452007-01-19T06:54:00.000-07:002007-01-19T06:54:00.000-07:00Pepek, a villanelle! This is excellent! Love "Ther...Pepek, a villanelle! This is excellent! Love "There is a certain holiness in repetition" and the layers of meaning. <BR/><BR/>This is why I love Poetry Thursday, because I am constantly amazed by the talent and skill of poets like you, my dear. <BR/><BR/>It's a near perfect poem, P. Nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169194629820916512007-01-19T01:17:00.000-07:002007-01-19T01:17:00.000-07:00Lovely, I like the way you've used rhyme and line ...Lovely, I like the way you've used rhyme and line breaks in this and just the right amount of repetition.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169175394435864632007-01-18T19:56:00.000-07:002007-01-18T19:56:00.000-07:00This is the line I chose too! I liked the way you...This is the line I chose too! I liked the way you wove the theme of innocents throughout this. I conjured up quiet cathedrals in my mind.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169166771104159092007-01-18T17:32:00.000-07:002007-01-18T17:32:00.000-07:00Thanks. And you're welcome.Thanks. And you're welcome.Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169166261580399592007-01-18T17:24:00.001-07:002007-01-18T17:24:00.001-07:00And thanks for your line this week - I loved using...And thanks for your line this week - I loved using it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14709545.post-1169166243470552092007-01-18T17:24:00.000-07:002007-01-18T17:24:00.000-07:00Reading this is like visiting the old churches in ...Reading this is like visiting the old churches in England. I'm fascinated and a little frightened and definitely in awe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com